Magazine Advert Flatplan

My flat plan for the magazine advert for my music video. This is my first draft of what I would like it to look like. This will help me to begin to visualise what my final magazine avert will look like. It has a single layout but this will help to attract the attention of both my primary and secondary target audience. 

Feedback: 

I like where the date of the song release is placed but I think that the name of the song should be at the top of the magazine advert rather than the bottom. This will make it stand out more to the audience. - Sophie